Drunk & Orderly

Peoniesheady pink flowers
drunk from the night’s dew –
recovering slowly,
standing tall on slender stalks
trying not to topple over

MikeJackson©2015

Carpe Diem Special #163 Lolly’s fifth a peony bush (tanka)

3 Comments

  1. joanna

    Loved your dropping the -dis-.
    In fact, the entire presentation of those plants with their mophead flowers lolling from side to side, is wonderful.

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